Monday 29 August 2016

Room 21 speech

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WALT: write a speech
Remember to:
  • followed the hamburger technique
  • check that message/information/story is clear
  • a have ending that is effective & finishes off the speech
  • write my ideas in a logical order
  • check my speech is suited to my target audience
  • write my speech in my words

Have you ever felt sad and alone? What's the first thing you do?  Go and sit in a corner and cry well if you put on music it can make you more happy than anything in the world. When you are happy and hanging out with friends  What do you do, listen to music. When a movie begins, what can you hear…. That's loud music, sad music, happy music and much more. Hi i'm Vegas and i’m going to be talking to you about a sad and lonely world without music. Listen carefully……... can you hear it………... listen closely………. Thats right silence. That is what a world without music would sound like and no one likes silence when they are happy right.  We are such lucky people because we have singers and music writers to make music for us.

In a world without music everyone would be more sad than they already are!!. Your heart would be cold because music gives you energy and makes you warm. When you listen to music you get the power to build a skyscraper or well anything.  It can tell a story or teleport you to a different world.  
People’s lives are music, some people make money to live off music and it inspires people to become music writers, singers and dancers.  A world without music means that you can’t hear the beats of the ground or the swings of the trees or the music of the world.


If you feel sad and want to be happy  just put on music it will fill your heart with happiness.  We use music for a lot of things like movies, parties and dancing.

This explains why I have chosen a world without music would be a horrible place to live for my speech topic.  I hope you learnt something from this speech and tonight when you get home, you should listen to some music.




This is my speech

Tuesday 23 August 2016

Better blog comment's

Today in class we were working on better comment's here is mine. hope it helps you with your blog comment's.

Monday 15 August 2016

Olympic Story

As you know, the Olympic Games have started over in Rio.  We will use this great festival of sport for our prompt this week.
It is:
…I could see the finish line, then…
Things to consider:
  • Which sport is this?
  • What might be going to happen?
  • How do you feel?

I could see the finish line, my hammer landed just past it then it was that next person's turn.I was wondering if he would beat my hammer throw record. By now I was really worried was he going to win and then he threw it. The hammer was like an eagle flying and it landed…… 1INCH ahead of mine. NOOOOOOOOO! Another silver medal for me.