WALT: add descriptive words to my writing.
Remember to:
- use your senses - what can you hear, see, smell, touch and taste
- add in similes and metaphors
- using feelings
Diary of a silly Lion
Dear diary, today I have tried to eat a squirrel but he smacked me and ran away. Tomorrow will be a better day.
Dear diary, I have eaten an acorn but that resulted in all my teeth falling out, even my favourite\
tooth. That was the tooth that I tried to eat a rock with. Luckily they will grow back in 20 months.
Dear diary, I saw a giraffe today. I dug a hole and hid up in it. I thought it make me taller but it just made me much much smaller like a ant. Then I climb up a tree but it broke and it really hurt my butt, I was sad.
Dear diary, I have made some stills I was finally taller but I tripped and fell in the swamp. So many frogs.
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